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8月25日

Questions

Of the poetry I have written, this is one of my favorites.  Let me know what you think.
 
 
 
 
 

Questions

 

What is your permanent address?

No place is permanent

Some places just hold us longer

      than others

North Carolina’s balmy beaches held

     me much longer than the 

        frigid coast lines of New England

The song of the sea calls to me

 

How old are you?

I believe I am a relatively young soul

This being my fifth or sixth cycle

Struggling to find the wisdom to ascend

Until I have the final piece of the puzzle

 

Are you married?

Yes, finally it is real

After the actors and imposters brought the

   theater to a close

The star at long last arrived

 

What is your greatest accomplishment?

I did not go insane

When I was thrown naked into the pit

Lost I roamed the under belly of the earth

Eventually I made the darkness my friend

 

Describe a crucial event in you life

Two months before my fortieth birthday

The word stopped rotating on its axis

The sun dimmed and fell from the sky

Oxygen must have left the earth for I

    could no longer breath

 

What are your future plans?

To slay the red dragon that burns me with

    pain and destruction

To once again feel the warm sands of Waikiki

    between my toes

To sweep away the last traces of the German,

    who does not deserve the dignity of his name              

To teach the trees to tango at midnight

 

o lcpickles

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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songfairy 发表:
wonderful writing well done. spoken from the heart. ^S^ I just found you listed on past puberty and thought I would visit you. I love your site. I'm just taking a wander around the sites of people over 40 and telling them about a new way of advertising their site, making new friends and getting more visitors. It's called Life begins at 40 and you can find it growing on lots of sites. Pick one and join. Enter lots of details about your site to encourage people to come and visit you. When you have been approved for membership you will be emailed a code so that you too can have the ring on your site. When you do please write a little about the site so people know what it is about and ask people if they join through your site to leave a message so that you can make sure you go and visit them and leave a comment for them. This will help encourage the ring to grow and help you make loads of new friends. Great Idea costs you nothing (a real bonus) and helps you out to boot. How could you say no. Sending love and hugs from the songfairy?
If you follow this link you will find my ring, Click on list and go visit other places in the link. You don't have to join on my site, You can join anywhere you see the life begins at 40 box. Thank you for reading this. I look forward to becoming your new friend.
http://spaces.msn.com/members/indiaejones/Blog/cns!1pGDXJr9w51ZYWXPM1TW7reA!3025.entry
8 月 28 日
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Thotman 发表:
very great...wonderfully just right
8 月 27 日
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sDtCatLover 发表:
Electric,
Thanks for stopping by! Like you said, it's only one week of nights, and thank God it's over!
I like your Space, I'd like to put it in my Spaces Worth a Visit. That'll also make it easier for me to get back here often.

I very much enjoyed this poem. I think what I enjoyed most is the way you delve into different thought provoking areas. Take care,
Back soon,
Debra
8 月 26 日
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Mark 发表:
Excellent thoughts! I love it, it spoke to me in many ways!

You did what the great poets do best and that is to touch a persons soul!

Mark
8 月 26 日
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Ruthie 发表:
I don't know why you've been blocked out of my site this week. I've been up and running and receiving comments here and there and I have traffic in my stats, but I've had trouble getting into leave comments at another space now and then. If it persists, try contacting msn. Try the Help button at the bottom of the screen. I've been too tired to do more than post a picture from my files with a school related caption.
8 月 26 日
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Inner_garbage 发表:
Indeed this is sweet. Thanks for the comment today on my poems. Your space is cool indeed. Hugs,~Silent
8 月 26 日
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SandraAKA-Success 发表:
Thank you so much for that comment. That is one of the nicest thing sombody as ever said. And that is no lie. Thank you very much for this surpport. Thank you and god bless. ur a ture person. thank u.
8 月 26 日
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DazedKimberhaze 发表:
Thanks for visiting my blog! I love the poetry you posted in yours! Great Stuff!

K
8 月 26 日
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Darlene04 发表:
That is some great writing,I would love to read more.You have a gift. The star at long last arrived. I love it! Take care,I'll drop back in later. ; )
8 月 26 日
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Hedgehog01 发表:
Hi there! Just read your poem. You are the poet! I just didn't understand the last part about the German. What did that part mean?

Thanks for your concern about my back. I've had a lot of people think I have a bad back. My back is just fine. I went to work out just to lift weights. It was my foot that was so sore from the long drive home on the previous night. So I'm going to be ok! :)
8 月 26 日
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IMSpidey 发表:
Electric,

I thought your tome insightful, It gave my mind an eye full

From New England coastline, To Wiakiki

What a nice little slice of fantacy

Pray ye slay that dragon that burns you and live to tango at midnight, so the tree's will know where to find thee...

Mikey
8 月 25 日
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luvmaggie2 发表:
That is so giood
8 月 25 日
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LovingJaime 发表:
I literally, outloud, just said, "Wow." That was amazing. "What is your greatest accomplishment? I did not go insane...Eventually I made the darkness my friend"

Damn, that's good writing.

And, "To teach the trees to tango at midnight." Gorgeous.

Have a peaceful night. Thanks for visiting. I'll be back. Jaime.
8 月 25 日
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CThatart 发表:
I would love to read your date nightmare. I have more too.
8 月 25 日

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